What area(s) could have used more detail?

Details: Please review the job posting and cover letter created by Colleague Ivy.(Job posting and cover letter created by Colleague Ivy is attached). Once you have read the job posting and cover letter created by Colleague Ivy, please answer the follow questions.
o Was the colleague’s cover letter appropriate for the job indicated?
o What were the strengths of the cover letter?
o What area(s) could have used more detail?
o Suggest changes to the letter that would make it more effective for the job as listed. Include specific rationales for any recommended changes.
o Address the potential ethical issues the colleague mentioned as well as any you see that were not mentioned